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I wish View
by dolphinnelly on October 22, 2008 at 14:56:30 PDT

I wish I were a dolphin
So graceful and strong
So joyous and curious
Dancing in the waves and travelling the seas.
I wish I were a butterfly
Fluttering along with the breeze
My wings full of colour
Me sitting on some flowers.
I wish I were a rabbit
So white and furry
I�d nibble my carrot
And cuddle my mate.
I wish I were the moon
So bright and round
Lighting up half the Earth
While people slumber and dream.
I wish I were a tree
Tall and strong and also protecting
Sheltering people from rain and sun
And also providing with food.
I wish I were a dog
Loyal and loving
I�d take care of someone
And love them till my death.
I wish I were a cat
Treated like a queen
I know one thing for sure though
I wouldn�t chase a rat!
I wish I were a candle
Giving light and warmth
I�d stand bright and proud
Until my wick gave out.
But since I can�t be any of those
I�ll just be me and dream
And love, learn, play and laugh
Until my time is up.

Copyright - Nehal Shah, 2008
- Re: I wish View
  by buxy on October 23, 2008 at 15:10:36 PDT
  
  Should I be flattered that you persist in displaying your version of my original poem? I should ask for a bunch of money every time you do it... I'd be rich by now! LOL They say imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.
  If anyone would care to see the original, feel free to email me for it, though I did post it here once, 5 years ago.
  buxy
  - Ah... True colours for all to see... of course - friends stick up for friends, right Amy? :- View
    by dolphinnelly on October 27, 2008 at 14:47:17 PDT
    
    : Should I be flattered that you persist in displaying your version of my original poem? I should ask for a bunch of money every time you do it... I'd be rich by now! LOL They say imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.
    : If anyone would care to see the original, feel free to email me for it, though I did post it here once, 5 years ago.
    : buxy

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